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Day 1
One bring colourful atuam morning a group of 5 boys decided to go to sweden for a holiday.they started packing troy brang a 3 long sleeves and a pear of shorts,Luke packed a T-shirt and some jeans leityn brang jeans a cap and a t-shirt and theo brang a jacket jeans t-shirt and shorts.As they were all ready they order 2 taxis to bring to the airport as 3 minutes passed they made it over to the airport they paid the taxi driver and walked in as they saw the line to sweden there was no one in the line because the pilot was drunk but they didn’t care they went on board as 7 hours passed they heard the pilot yell JUMP! So the group did just that sadly the pilot door was locked so the pilot died a miserable death.Leityn did not accept but it was to late they fell in the ocean as night started to fall they started to rip metal of the plane as something to keep them floating for a while.
Day 2
As the bright vibrant yellow sun started to rise the group of 5 looked around to see if there was any land around they had no hope of surviving on the ocean so they gave up hope until luke found a piece of sand in the distance,Luke yelled at the top of his voice “GUYS I THINK I FOUND LAND!!!” the other 4 started to follow luke over to the island as an hour passed they made it they released it was just a pile of sand and a bunch of bamboo.Troy remembered how to build a raft in intermediate he grabbed a rock and started beating the bamboo so the others helped out but dayvd started collecting vines for rope to tie it together.The raft was finished it wasn't the best but it would have to do for now they all hopped on and stared paddling until they found a real island with trees and creatures as they all gleard with joy they now had hope.
Day 3
As they got on the island they started looking for a special place to rest because the moon was out with its biggest shined leityn and Theo lying on the sand remembering when they were little.Dayvd came over to tell them that they found a great spot to rest the 3 walked over they saw lushes green grass and a high hill to rest on so the water doesn’t get to them.they had a rest but luke couldn’t get to sleep so he went on walk over to the dusty sand he saw a school of fish swimming together he remembered his family and his brudas.
Day 4
As the others got up they saw luke lying under a lushes tree with pretty green leaves,They woke luke only to find him lying beside a turtle trying to help to keep lukewarm the turtle crawled slowly back to the ocean but the others lifted him and gently putting him in the water Theo asked why luke didn’t sleep with the others luke respond “he couldn't get to sleep” luke told the truth he heard sounds he knew that they weren't by them self.Leityn told everyone to look for food two will be hunting and the other three will look for fruit and veggies.Dayvd found at least 3 potatoes and 1 peach,luke found a rabbit,Leityn got 2 apples, and Theo got a hog and troy got the motherload of mandarins.
Day 5
As the group was walking back Luke told them that he heard noises at night that is why he couldn’t get to sleep.They started looking for odd stuff on the island until they found under the hill the other 4 slept on it was really just a cave Leityn started leaning on the cave opening the secret door.The group walked in only to find blood on the saying GEt ride of humans almost all of the group freaked out but troy the brave he was.They started to create traps around the hill and walls built out of woods with ripped edges.There was only one entry witch was at the back were two people would watch out and take turns guarding the fort night fell on the group guarding it they stood there waiting as 1 hour passed they switched Leityn and troy were guarding next they heard rusling from the closest bush Theo placed the wooden bear traps ready for everything Troy started yelling to wake the others up they grabbed their spears wich was made of branches and a stone end… As morning came they saw there potatoes were gone the monster didn’t eat the group they ate the potatoes the others were so thankful but not Luke he loved potatoes he fell to his knees and yelled “NOT DA POTATOES!!!!!!!!!”.
Day 6
The monster heard Luke he ran out chasing the group they couldn’t out run it they found the raft they made on day 2 they hopped on and started rowing out to sea until they left leityn behind they went back to get leityn they saw him running over with a log and the crate of food.He got the log and hit the monster in the head and knocked it out as leityn got on with the food the monster woke back up but the group was to quick the were already rowing.
Day 7
The helicopter came sweeping down the pilots dropped the ladder so the group started climbing up the ladder they all got on the helicopter went up into the sky only riesling that the island was shaped as a skull.By Theo The End
DRAFT: 1st edition of my writing. NO EDITING FROM ANYBODY ELSE.
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Day 1
One bring colourful atuam morning a group of 5 boys decided to go to sweden for a holiday.they started packing troy brang a 3 long sleeves and a pear of shorts,Luke packed a T-shirt and some jeans leityn brang jeans a cap and a t-shirt and theo brang a jacket jeans t-shirt and shorts.As they were all ready they order 2 taxis to bring to the airport as 3 minutes passed they made it over to the airport they paid the taxi driver and walked in as they saw the line to sweden there was no one in the line because the pilot was drunk but they didn’t care they went on board as 7 hours passed they heard the pilot yell JUMP! So the group did just that sadly the pilot door was locked so the pilot died a miserable death.Leityn did not accept but it was to late they fell in the ocean as night started to fall they started to rip metal of the plane as something to keep them floating for a while.
Day 2
As the bright vibrant yellow sun started to rise the group of 5 looked around to see if there was any land around they had no hope of surviving on the ocean so they gave up hope until luke found a piece of sand in the distance,Luke yelled at the top of his voice “GUYS I THINK I FOUND LAND!!!” the other 4 started to follow luke over to the island as an hour passed they made it they released it was just a pile of sand and a bunch of bamboo.Troy remembered how to build a raft in intermediate he grabbed a rock and started beating the bamboo so the others helped out but dayvd started collecting vines for rope to tie it together.The raft was finished it wasn't the best but it would have to do for now they all hopped on and stared paddling until they found a real island with trees and creatures as they all gleard with joy they now had hope.
Day 3
As they got on the island they started looking for a special place to rest because the moon was out with its biggest shined leityn and Theo lying on the sand remembering when they were little.Dayvd came over to tell them that they found a great spot to rest the 3 walked over they saw lushes green grass and a high hill to rest on so the water doesn’t get to them.they had a rest but luke couldn’t get to sleep so he went on walk over to the dusty sand he saw a school of fish swimming together he remembered his family and his brudas.
Day 4
As the others got up they saw luke lying under a lushes tree with pretty green leaves,They woke luke only to find him lying beside a turtle trying to help to keep lukewarm the turtle crawled slowly back to the ocean but the others lifted him and gently putting him in the water Theo asked why luke didn’t sleep with the others luke respond “he couldn't get to sleep” luke told the truth he heard sounds he knew that they weren't by them self.Leityn told everyone to look for food two will be hunting and the other three will look for fruit and veggies.Dayvd found at least 3 potatoes and 1 peach,luke found a rabbit,Leityn got 2 apples, and Theo got a hog and troy got the motherload of mandarins.
Day 5
As the group was walking back Luke told them that he heard noises at night that is why he couldn’t get to sleep.They started looking for odd stuff on the island until they found under the hill the other 4 slept on it was really just a cave Leityn started leaning on the cave opening the secret door.The group walked in only to find blood on the saying GEt ride of humans almost all of the group freaked out but troy the brave he was.They started to create traps around the hill and walls built out of woods with ripped edges.There was only one entry witch was at the back were two people would watch out and take turns guarding the fort night fell on the group guarding it they stood there waiting as 1 hour passed they switched Leityn and troy were guarding next they heard rusling from the closest bush Theo placed the wooden bear traps ready for everything Troy started yelling to wake the others up they grabbed their spears wich was made of branches and a stone end… As morning came they saw there potatoes were gone the monster didn’t eat the group they ate the potatoes the others were so thankful but not Luke he loved potatoes he fell to his knees and yelled “NOT DA POTATOES!!!!!!!!!”.
Day 6
The monster heard Luke he ran out chasing the group they couldn’t out run it they found the raft they made on day 2 they hopped on and started rowing out to sea until they left leityn behind they went back to get leityn they saw him running over with a log and the crate of food.He got the log and hit the monster in the head and knocked it out as leityn got on with the food the monster woke back up but the group was to quick the were already rowing.
Day 7
The helicopter came sweeping down the pilots dropped the ladder so the group started climbing up the ladder they all got on the helicopter went up into the sky only riesling that the island was shaped as a skull.By Theo The End
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